Hmm, Yeah, Yours is equivalent. I'm still kinda learning all this stuff, I mean, I can get a lot of stuff done, but I take a lot more steps then I end up having to.
Thanks for all the input.
And about the negatives, I wasn't really trying to avoid it. It's mostly just for fun, So giving people negative's is more fun that it saying "They don't have any cookies to take!" ;)