Weasel take some time and think of what to make and if it is post worthy or not. Posting the snippets you have been is pointless.
You should really think about joining a server that has a coding room that can help you. Really you should.
There are tons of servers that have coding rooms and a few that will help you learn how to script in msl.
Hell you can even join the server im on. There are people that will help you there. For the server addy it's in my profile, but please get help somewhere.