I agree with spanky, lol, but this is how people learn I guess.

Perhaps you could make if for multiple servers aswell, encorporate that into the idea, for instance:

on *:connect:{
  if ($network == Fake-IRC) {
    ns identify password
    join #
  }
  elseif ($network == AnotherFake-IRC) {
    ns identify A different password
  }
}

This way checks what network you're on, and does the appropiate actions.
And you could keep going basically, with elseifs.

I hope this helps. 6/10 for effort :)

BTW: There's no need for the /