Part of getting better is criticism. I tried not to be too harsh, but it takes feedback to get better at scripting. I wasn\'t trying to be cruel or anything, but just giving him feedback. I can\'t give this snippet a high rating because it isn\'t efficient enough. That will just encourage him to become a little better and try to learn.
Half of my comment was directed at other users by the way, but I can\'t disagree with them either. I, personally, don\'t see a difference whether it is one text event or many (besides organization).